Telltales that transcend the train of thought.

Through the louvres of the belfry windows.

Posted in insights by rowlandanthony on September 26, 2009

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Whimsey did not want to hear it anymore. He made his way down to the belfry door and climbed the stair to the ringing chamber. The bells were still sounding their frenzied call. He passed the sweating ringers and climbed again – up through the clock-chamber, piled with household goods, and up on to the bell-chamber itself. As his head rose through the floor, the brazen fury of the bells fell about his ears like the blows from a thousand beating hammers. The whole tower was drenched an drunken with noise. It rocked and reeled with the reelings of the bells, and staggered like a drunken man. Stunned and shaken, Wimsey set his foot on the last ladder.

Halfway up he stopped, clinging desperately with his hands. He was pierced through and buffeted by the clamour. Through the brazen crash and clatter there went one high note, shrill and sustained, that was like a sword in the brain. All the blood in his body seemed to rush to his head, swelling it to bursting-point. He released his hold on the ladder and tried to shut out the uproar with his fingers, but such a sick giddiness overcame him that he swayed, ready to fall. It was not noise – it was brute pain, a grinding, bludgeoning, ran-dan, crazy, intolerable moment. He felt himself screaming, but could not hear his own cry. His ear-drums were cracking; his senses swam away. It was infinitely worse than any roar of heavy artillery. That had beaten and deafened, but this unendurable shrill clangour was a raving madness, an assault of devils. He could move neither forward nor backwards through his failing wits urged him, ‘I must get out- I must get out of this.’ The belfry heaved and wheeled about him as the bells dipped and swung with their tongues of bronze, and through it all that shrill, high, sweet, relentless note went stabbing and shivering.

He could not go down, for his head dizzied and stomach retched at the thought of it. With a last, desperate sanity he clutched at the ladder and forced his tottering limbs upward. Foot by foot, rung by rung, he fought his way to the top. Now the trap-door was close above his head. He raised a leaden hand and thrust the blt aside. Staggering, feeling as though his bones were turned to water, and with blood running from his nose and ears, he felt rather than stepped, out upon the windy roof. As he flung the door to behind him, the demoniac clangour sank back into the pit, to rise again, transmuted to harmony, through the louvres of the belfry windows.

An extract from The Nine Tailors
Dorothy L. Sayers, Landsborough Publications 1959
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  1. A said, on October 15, 2009 at 9:02 pm

    Hi! I am IB student and I see that you are doing the IB, which is also probably why you have posted this extract, right? Did you do a commentry on this? If so, can you please, please send it to me? I have got the same extract to ananlyse and I just dont get the hang of it (the reason why I googled it and stumbbled upon your blog) Can I see yours just for reference, I assure you I won’t copy it coz I know the cosequences of plagiarism since I go to an IB school too.
    If you have done a commentry on it PLEASE send it to me, you have my e-mail id. It will be a big help! This is a plea from one dying IB student to another!!
    And btw, I also noticed that we are doing the same subjects: Physics, Chemistry, Maths, Economics, English and French! What a coincidence!

  2. rowlandanthony said, on October 15, 2009 at 9:22 pm

    hellow fellow IB student! how is IB treating you? :)

    Anyway, I’m really sorry to say this, but I didn’t do a commentary on this extract. I just found the story really interesting so I posted this one online.

    But if you want my opinion about this one, I believe that the author has managed to convey the reality of Whimsey’s situation inside the belfry through the massive use of vocabulary and literary devices. Somehow the prose seems very heavy and difficult to read due to the complex vocabulary, his choice of bombastic words; some long, complicated sentence structures; and a significantly large number of literary devices that he uses one after another. Overall, it mimics the heaviness and uneasiness of the deafening sound of the bells. It’s like. you feel so uneasy after reading it! I’m sure you’ve somehow felt that feeling. :D

    Hope this helps! You might want to expand these ideas and incorporate some of your own. (:

  3. A said, on October 15, 2009 at 9:57 pm

    IB is crazy!!
    Anyway, I agree, I did get that uneasy feeling after reading it. Thank you sooooo much for this, it’s a big help.
    Are you about to give your exams soon?

  4. rowlandanthony said, on October 15, 2009 at 10:08 pm

    Yes! haha, 20 something more days.

    Scary.

    Where do you study? You’re on your final year?

  5. A said, on October 16, 2009 at 11:20 am

    Oh! Good luck then!!
    Nah, I’m in grade 11 and in three months of being there I’ve been driven mad…

  6. rowlandanthony said, on October 16, 2009 at 3:44 pm

    Thank you! I see. You still have a long way to go then. (:
    It’s gonna be ok, just remember that time management is the key to success (:

  7. A said, on October 16, 2009 at 5:35 pm

    Haha! Thank you for that advice!
    And I finally finished my essay, the only problem is I don’t know how to conclude. Do you have any suggestions? :)

  8. A said, on October 16, 2009 at 5:37 pm

    Oh and btw, i LOVED that site you posted, IB Quotes.com. Its awesome!! Hahaha! :D

  9. Anna said, on October 21, 2009 at 1:01 am

    Hey

    Looks like there’s a lot of us IBers out there.
    Had the same thing: working on my english commentary and tried to look up what in the world sweating ringers are – because last commentary I had completely missed the point because I didn’t know what half the words meant, so I realised that was a problem – and I found this blog and talking about coincidences, I have those subjects :D no kidding.
    higher physics, maths and eco, and standard french A, english and chem.

    anyway, that was a little distraction so I wouldn’t have to get right back to work.
    cheers.

  10. rowlandanthony said, on October 21, 2009 at 7:45 am

    Haha. our numbers are graudally increasing worldwide. Standard French A? A1 or A2? Nevertheless, that’s really really cooool. I take ab initio! C’est vraiment difficile >.<
    haha
    HL Econs, Maths, Chem, & SL English, Physics, French ab initio (:


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